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PostSubject: Love sroty-I will came with something better this is for now   Fri Jan 04, 2008 7:37 pm

This is my first fanfiction EVER!!! I hope that you will like it!

First chapter
Prologue

Dear diary,
Tomorrow is final day my 13 birthday Iím not happy because of that I will be decommissioned. My friends are already decommissioned they donít remember me anymore or anything that have with Kids next door. But before all my teammates were decommissioned the global command told us that we will be recommissioned later, I donít get it but one day I will. Thatís all they told us. I missed my friends and especially Wally I never told him about my feelings for him, I wanted but I couldnít and he forget me and all times we spent together and tomorrow I will forgot him. I must go now, my mum wants me to help her to prepare party and cake that will be the worst birthday party ever.
Kuki Sanban AKA #3

One year later
"Hi Abby!!!"- The teenage girl with long black hair said to her best friend Abigail.
"Hey Kuki!!!"- She replied.
"Are we going on that ice cream or not?"- Kuki asked her friend.
"Yeah sorry Iím late come on."
"Yay."
"Kuki what flavor you want?"
"I donít know chocolate or strawberry or vanilla oh no maybe pistachio or no no.................."
"Oh girl hurry up ........"
"Ok give me mmm........ chocolate and pistachio." Ė She told to ice cream man. "And I want strawberry and chocolate."-Abigail said and give money to ice cream man.
"Here you go young ladies."- Ice cream man said and he give them ice cream.
"Thanks."
"Oh finally."- Abby said.
"Oh look is that your boyfriend."
"My what.... no he is not my boyfriend."
"Oh donít lie I saw you kissing."
"So what you flirt with every boy."
"Well I......."
"Oh come on you are the most popular girl among boys."
"Oh please."- Kuki rolled her eyes.
"What?"
"He is coming."- Kuki said.
"Who?"
"Hey baby."- One guy said to Abby.
"Hi Ryan."
"Um mm Abby Iím leaving you with your boyfriend."- Kuki said and giggled then she gone.
"I told you Kuki."- Abby replied.
"Why not?"
"What?"- Abby asked confused.
"Well you wanna be my girl?" Ė He asked her.
"Ryan I donít know I didnít think about this I...."
"Come on give me a chance."
"Well, all right."- She said.
"I know how we can start."- He leaned and kissed her straight on the lips.
"Hey beauty, hey wait?"- One guy cried.
"What do you want?"- Kuki asked the guy.
"You, I want you."
"How many times I must to tell you to leave me alone."
"I canít because how many times I must to tell you that I love you."
"I told you that Iím sorry but I donít feel the same way."
"Oh come on maybe you are the prettiest girl, the flirty, but you canít persist this."- He said and than he kissed her on the lips.
SLAP
"Donít do that ever again."- She slapped him.
"You are so cute when you are mad."
"Uh you see that I can persist."- She said and leaves.
"Oh man she is fire."- He said to his friends.
"You canít have her Kev."- One of his friends told him.
"Why not every girl wants me."- He replied.
"Yes but not she."
"She will be mine I swear."

"Wally dear come here."- Wallyís mother said.
"Yes mum what?"
"Your friend Hoagie is here."
"Coming, hey mate."- They shake.
"Hey Wally I need to talk with you."
"Ok come in."
They went to Wallyís room.
"Sit."- Wally said and sits with his friend on bed.
"Ok mate is there problem or something."-Wally asked him.
"Yeah one big problem."
"What happened?"
"She leaves me."
"Who?"
"Oh Wally my girlfriend, she is gone."
"What with other guy?"
"No, she told me that she is going to move, she gone in Romania."
"Wow thatís really far away."
"Yeah she said that she loves me but she must go."
"Oh man Iím sorry for you."
"I donít know what to do I will never fall in love again."
"Oh donít said that Hoag everything will be ok and you will fall in love again, believe me."
"I canít."
"Donít be pessimist."
"Thanks Wally but you donít understand you never fall in love with any girl, you never had a girlfriend although all girls are around you."
"Maybe but I ...uh you are right."
"Iím sorry pal Iím not in mood Iím going home I must think about some things."
He leaves.

"NIGEL UNO WE HAVE DATE TONIGHT!"- Skinny girl in yellow T-shirt, blue skirt and with braids yell at her boyfriend.
"Hi Lizzie."- He said in monotone.
"Are you ready I told you that we have a date?"
"Yeah sure come on."
"Where are you taking me?"- She now asked him with sweet voice.
"Wherever you want, we can go on theatre what you say about that?"- Nigel suggested.
"No our date must be the most romantically date ever."
"Whatever."
"Oh Nigie maybe you are right we can go in theatre and see super romantically movie ever."
"All right come on."

Wally was in his room on his bed thinking. Sentence that Hoagie told him was in his head rolling over and over again." You never fall in love with any girl, you never had a girlfriend although all girls are around you." And that was true many girls liked him but he never liked any of them he start to worry about himself.
Why I canít remember my past, what happened to me? I canít remember anything? Did I ever fall in love with any girl and if I did why I canít remember?

Where my life gone since 8 to 13?
- Wally thought.

Wally wasnít the only teenage who was asking those questions "What happened?"

Please tell me if you like it or not?


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PostSubject: Re: Love sroty-I will came with something better this is for now   Sat Jan 05, 2008 1:24 pm

It's good. good job But it's now finished, right? It's sounds great for now, so finish it to read more. And once again it's great. woot
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PostSubject: Re: Love sroty-I will came with something better this is for now   Wed Jan 09, 2008 3:51 am

I finally got around to reading this thing...

It's very good! I can't believe it's your first try.
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PostSubject: Re: Love sroty-I will came with something better this is for now   Thu Jan 10, 2008 11:06 pm

Thanks.I was thinking about to delete this.But I will finish it.
Thank you this means a lot to me.
Very Happy
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